Sponsor Child Africa

Is this correct letter to my sponsor.?
This letter is to my sponsor child in Africa. This is my first time to write it. Dear Elisa, my name is and I'm ***** ** years. *** I am in grade. I live in ***********. ********* Valley East. It amounts many mountains. The maximum temperature is 85 degrees in summer. There are 5 people in my family: my mother, father, older brother and older sister. We are all very close. I like reading, listen to music and sport. My favorite food is rice. What are your activities? What is your favorite food? How many people are in your family? What is your community? Elisa, you suck something you like. I believe in you. The stars will not be there, but I do not want people to know my information.
Yes, letter very good! You share information about you, but also asking questions, showing that you are also interested in it! You have also given the opportunity for more information about the things you said. Good job!
Sponsor a child with EveryChild in Malawi, North Africa
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Light Shining Through the Mist $13.33 In 1966, with no experience or formal scientific training, Dian Fossey left the United States and set up her gorilla observation camp in the Virunga mountains of Africa. Under the sponsorship of Dr. Louis Leakey, the 34-year-old Fossey had embarked |